Today is a due day of our first draft!! Since my USB was broken (I don't know why), I wrote my first draft twice and that kept me awake till 5:30 this morning..;P
I had a big concern about my essay..that is.. my essay seems not to be argumentitive. I mean, I use many words for explaining ethnic integration policy conducted by Singapore government, and my statement is not strong. ummmm...
However, Ken gave me wonderful advice in the class! So, I will try my best to state my thesis statement strongly by using the content of body paragraph effectively! I will make a littele change of my thesis statement :D Thank you very much Ken, Mari and Yoshiki!!!
Hi Yoshika,
ReplyDeleteYou are doing great, and I am sorry you had to stay up all night because your USB was broken.
Ken
Hi Yoshika,
ReplyDeleteI just wanted to thank you for trying blogging this term. The main idea was to set up a blog and make a couple of entries to experiment with this kind of communicating with one another. I appreciate your doing that, and the thoughts you shared.
Thanks for being such a good student. You are in a wonderful section, and I wish you all the very best.
Ken